Thankyou Clint, David, Richard and Adrian for your positivity, encouragement and gentleness.
The inner demons have been having a field day since I posted. They choked when I showed them your comments.
The things I'll improve are:
* complete the phrases so that they resolve or to use Richard's words 'close the cadence to make it an authentic cadence.'
* sustain the notes rather than jump abruptly from one to the next
* land smack bang on the right place on the string and stay there. Sometimes I take it off pitch because I'm bending it a little.
* get closer to the fret. I don't have enough stretch to reach from one note to the next in places, especially when I play G in the 1st position. I land between frets on the side of the finger, so I have to jump this causes the problem noted prior.
* make the rhythm tighter
* make the melody sync tighter with the track with more interaction and conversation.
I'd like to record my own backing as per Richards lesson too. Step by step I'll get there.
At least I've broken the ice. Thanks friends
