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Offline polestar

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strange BUT true - Original
« on: May 23, 2018, 07:44:27 am »
[https://soundcloud.com/pole_star/strange-but-true]
Hi, sharing a recent original, have a listen, all comments warmly accepted.  cheers!

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Re: strange BUT true - Original
« Reply #1 on: May 23, 2018, 07:46:10 am »
I'm having a technically challenged moment, i cant for the life of me work out how to link a soundcloud track to a post. Any clever people here?

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Re: strange BUT true - Original
« Reply #2 on: May 23, 2018, 08:49:19 am »
Welcome!

I'm having a technically challenged moment, i cant for the life of me work out how to link a soundcloud track to a post. Any clever people here?
That is simply because you need more posts before you can do that.
Look here: https://justinguitarcommunity.com/index.php?topic=29431.0

Re. your tune: good sound and some interesting harmonies. Good job!
I shall let the more experienced people here provide more useful feedback.

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Re: strange BUT true - Original
« Reply #3 on: May 23, 2018, 09:18:28 am »
Here’s the link,
https://m.soundcloud.com/pole_star/strange-but-true

Sounds quite interesting, a bit repetitive but not so much to make it boring, I liked the harmonies between the guitar tracks but think maybe the bass lines could have been a bit stronger and maybe a bit more melodic; that said it’s nice to listen to so well done!
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Re: strange BUT true - Original
« Reply #4 on: May 23, 2018, 08:42:28 pm »
Playing, recording, tones and mix all sounded good to me ... pleasant, melodic piece.  I think I'd like to hear a little more progression and development of the theme throughout ... perhaps to start, go on some kind of trip and return somehow to the starting part ... but really well above my play-grade to make serious suggestions on a piece like this.

Welcome to the community and look forward to more from you ...

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Re: strange BUT true - Original
« Reply #5 on: December 05, 2018, 07:44:30 pm »
Cool! Makes me think of Frank Zappa somehow. :-)

I'm sure it would sound good in a church or cathedral. There are some "medieval" sounding pieces in it if that makes any sense. :-)
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Re: strange BUT true - Original
« Reply #6 on: December 05, 2018, 07:49:32 pm »
By the way: I just listened to your "Mojo" song that came after this piece. I think it's really great man! I enjoyed it! :-)
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Re: strange BUT true - Original
« Reply #7 on: December 06, 2018, 03:49:10 pm »
You can play! Your Mojo track is first rate as previously stated, and earned a like from me straight away. This track was good, but I think Mojo ruined me a little. Looking forward to hearing more from you.

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Re: strange BUT true - Original
« Reply #8 on: December 07, 2018, 12:08:24 pm »
Sounds good to me, really like the tone on the guitars.
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