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Offline polestar

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strange BUT true - Original
« on: May 23, 2018, 07:44:27 am »
[https://soundcloud.com/pole_star/strange-but-true]
Hi, sharing a recent original, have a listen, all comments warmly accepted.  cheers!

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Re: strange BUT true - Original
« Reply #1 on: May 23, 2018, 07:46:10 am »
I'm having a technically challenged moment, i cant for the life of me work out how to link a soundcloud track to a post. Any clever people here?

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Re: strange BUT true - Original
« Reply #2 on: May 23, 2018, 08:49:19 am »
Welcome!

I'm having a technically challenged moment, i cant for the life of me work out how to link a soundcloud track to a post. Any clever people here?
That is simply because you need more posts before you can do that.
Look here: https://justinguitarcommunity.com/index.php?topic=29431.0

Re. your tune: good sound and some interesting harmonies. Good job!
I shall let the more experienced people here provide more useful feedback.

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Re: strange BUT true - Original
« Reply #3 on: May 23, 2018, 09:18:28 am »
Here’s the link,
https://m.soundcloud.com/pole_star/strange-but-true

Sounds quite interesting, a bit repetitive but not so much to make it boring, I liked the harmonies between the guitar tracks but think maybe the bass lines could have been a bit stronger and maybe a bit more melodic; that said it’s nice to listen to so well done!
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Re: strange BUT true - Original
« Reply #4 on: May 23, 2018, 08:42:28 pm »
Playing, recording, tones and mix all sounded good to me ... pleasant, melodic piece.  I think I'd like to hear a little more progression and development of the theme throughout ... perhaps to start, go on some kind of trip and return somehow to the starting part ... but really well above my play-grade to make serious suggestions on a piece like this.

Welcome to the community and look forward to more from you ...

 

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